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Manuel-Dangelo responds:

Your rite, Imma messing it all up, sorry.
I'll fix it up

Edit: Fixed, anithing else you may notice?

[Shinobu]

Awesome Technique!

Eyes, Mouth Head, Hair, are spot on, the hips are a bit wide.. but not TOO bad...

Although I have a challenge! Try drawing a girl, over several days working on one single part for each day, resting then coming back to it, but devoting several hours to each part of the body? I'd love to see some of your work that you put a ton of focus into, I think it'd be amazing and get front paged. Just a though :)

Caine1989 responds:

Well, on this one i worked maybe about an hour? xD Now i am working on another picture, with clean outlines and stuff. I was working on it for two days, and now only the head is done, or not? Dunno, but i want to put my whole focus into it!^^
Thanks for your review!^^ btw i like wide hips, not too wide, but a lil bit is okay! xD